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Diver Val 09-05-2012 08:44

Springtime in PP by Diver Val.
 
Has anyone else found this, whenever I am out in p.p. because of the beauty of the place and tranquility I find there, I become very aware of being creative, for example, on my last visit I composed this poem about spring, I will probably get into trouble for trying to post it on here, but just thought other members might like to read it and also be inspired.

Spring Morn

Look through the open window, I spy all springs delight
Cascading orange blossom, in colours pink and white,
I see the Tulip and the Rose, their beauty unsurpassed
The snow-drops and the daffodil, if only they could last.

The new born lambs are in their fields, and birds are reaching high,
The Mistle thrush, its song so sweet, with notes that soar and fly.
This special time of year is spring, no other can compare,
The waking of another morn, is ours alone to share.

any thoughts would be appreciated, good or bad.

Sparky 09-05-2012 09:02

That is lovely Val thank you very much for sharing it with us :D:D.

Diver Val 09-05-2012 09:10

should have given it a title
 
I realised after posting this, that I hadn't put a title only my name in the box. Should have realised that, but will know next time. And thank you for your comments Sparky.

Sparky 09-05-2012 09:24

Quote:

Originally Posted by Diver Val (Post 71017)
I realised after posting this, that I hadn't put a title only my name in the box. Should have realised that, but will know next time. And thank you for your comments Sparky.

I have changed the title Val, i hope you approve ;).

Diver Val 09-05-2012 09:45

wonderful Sparky, many thanks

redshirt 09-05-2012 10:43

Refreshing verse...very nice

Mike and Sue

cherylbb 09-05-2012 11:04

Thanks for posting Val, I enjoyed that.

TheCatalinaLira 11-05-2012 12:13

Quote:

Originally Posted by Diver Val (Post 71013)
Has anyone else found this, whenever I am out in p.p. because of the beauty of the place and tranquility I find there, I become very aware of being creative, for example, on my last visit I composed this poem about spring, I will probably get into trouble for trying to post it on here, but just thought other members might like to read it and also be inspired.

Spring Morn

Look through the open window, I spy all springs delight
Cascading orange blossom, in colours pink and white,
I see the Tulip and the Rose, their beauty unsurpassed
The snow-drops and the daffodil, if only they could last.

The new born lambs are in their fields, and birds are reaching high,
The Mistle thrush, its song so sweet, with notes that soar and fly.
This special time of year is spring, no other can compare,
The waking of another morn, is ours alone to share.

any thoughts would be appreciated, good or bad.

Val, I love it.
It is really a beautiful poem that creates colorful atmosphere of flying emotions.
My warm congratulation with such a great poem!

Diver Val 11-05-2012 21:20

Many thanks to all who have posted a response to my poem, I do appreciate the feedback. Have a great Summer in p.p.

val


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